CA - LR

1) Type up your feedback in full (you don't need to write the mark and grade if you want to keep this confidential).

 WWW- You show definite potential in media analysis with Q1 abnd Q4 offering some insightful points.

EBI-Genre is a major weakness : this needs revision points urgently. Answers genrally lack depth required for giher grades... Q4 needs to be more like a mini essay.



2) Read the mark scheme for this assessment carefully. Identify at least one potential point that you missed out on for each question in the assessment.

 Q1) More consistency in the media terminology and analysis of the media texts.

3) Read this exemplar response from one of the Y12s (one of the best, which is a strong B grade). Identify at least one potential point that you missed out on for each question in the assessment. 

4) Did you get any media terminology or theory wrong in the assessment? Make a note of it here for future revision, including theories/terminology that you could have used but didn't.

5) Identify your strongest question. Why did you do better on this question?

6) Identify your weakest question. Why did you score lower on this particular task?

7) Re-write your weakest answer in full. Use the mark scheme to identify anticipated content you can add to your response and make sure your typed re-draft is a top-level answer.

8) Email your re-written answer (7) to the next person below you on the blog list. Ask them to provide a WWW/EBI response before next Friday (10/11) and then include this underneath your answer on your blog. 

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