January - LR
1) Type up your feedback in full (you don't need to write the mark and grade if you want to keep this confidential) . WWW: You make an excellent start in all three questions but then don't have the depth to back this up. You're trying to cover both sides of the argument which is great - but need the knowledge to support this! EBI: Revision preparation seems to be the key area... you don't quite have he knowledge and understanding of the theory + terminology for the higher grades -Read the question! You don't mention cultivation theory in Q3 -Check written English - you've got some of the key terminology wrong in form of spelling 2) Read the mark scheme for this assessment carefully. Identify at least one potential point that you missed out on for each question in the assessment . 1) I missed the benefit for vertical integration, it was: Maintain control and profit at every stage of chain of producti...